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Due to the increase in the marriages of young people, there is a controversial debate whether young people should getting married at early age. While some people believe this has a number of negative effects on our lives, the others disagree.(This is my suggested introduction.)  There are a lot of advantages for marriage at early age, which is considered between 19 years old and 22 years old. The greatest advantage of getting married at a young age is that people can have more time to have children, especially those who want a big family. That is because young people at a very early age are more likely tobe able to produce more offspring than old people . Another benefit is that young people can get as much emotional support as they need from their partners and their woes and difficulties can also be shared between them. In fact, some people believe that they are at more ease to reveal their concern to their spouses than to other people. Occasionally, when the difficulties arise, advice and suggestions can be sought from the partners as well as the encouraging words. Moreover, people are able to learn to shoulder responsibilities at an early age. For instance, they have to stop relying on their parents and learn to depend on themselves and bear the responsibility of managing their own affairs. On the other hand, getting married at young age has many disadvantages too, particularly those who are from 10 years old to 18 years old. The main disadvantage is that they miss out on the fun of teenage life. It will deprive them of their youth. Thus, they cannot live their life as a normal child as the others who are at the same age. In addition, bringing up children may be difficult for their young parents, because their knowledge of child care and attention to children may not be enough. Therefore, they will not be able to provide the appropriate care for their child. Another demerit side is that early pregnancy and childbirth can affect the mother`s health. Young mothers are generally exposed to severe health problems such as miscarriage and the difficulty of delivering the baby. In addition, early pregnancy and childbirth can have a negative impact on mother`s health at young age.(This sentence is repeated. In conclusion, there are both positive and negative impacts on young couples. In my opinion, I believe that the most suitable married gap age is between 19 to 22 years old because at that stage people can obtain more advantages than the drawbacks from their marriage.















Model Answer 1: At the present time marriage partners are chosen by people themselves, but in the near past this decision was made by their parents. In my view, despite those parents don`t wish bad to their child, people should choose by themselves who they love. Due to that they will spend whole their life together. The following essay will discuss both sides of this issue.
Since the dawn of time the marriage was an important part of our life. Because of that choice of a partner is a tough decision and people have to consider all details before the marriage. In the near past children almost hadn`t rights to choose partner by themselves, in fact only parents could decide who their child is going to marry. Parents raised a child and all decisions related to their child should be made by them. Parents know their kid better than everyone and when they are giving them in marriage, they are taking into account the character of kid.
But currently this situation has been changed, due to that some parents aren’t concerned about the future of their child and trying to give their child to family which is rich, it is not always fair towards to children. Without love there is no future for their kids and as a result it leads to divorce. Even then, there are no ideal people and everyone could make a mistake, even when they are choosing their future partner by themselves. People always fall in love with each other before the marriage. After that their relationships would become colder and it also could lead to divorce.
After analyzing both sides of this issue, I`ve concluded that in spite of those parents taking into account all details, sometimes they are forgotten about love. The main thing of marriage is to bind two people which are in love with each other. Thus, people should choose whom they love by themselves.
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(This model answer was written by - AkmalSharipov)
Model Answer 2: The idea that a marriage should be arranged by the parents of the couple, or by other members-of the family, is quite acceptable to some societies, yet completely out of the question for others. It all depends on your cultural expectations. In so-called western societies, it is very unusual for marriages to be arranged. Most young people would not welcome the idea that their parents have the right to choose their partner for life. They feel that arranged marriages deny them their fundamental right to choose, even if they make a bad decision. However, if we are honest about it, we might acknowledge that some parents