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Bai mau; Money is not the most important thing in life

Money is certainly something which is often discussed in today’s world. Hard ly a day goes by without the subject of money being raised in most people’s lives . however , it is highly debatable whether it is more important than other considerations, such as health and fitness, which some people consider to be of greater significance

To begin with , it is often argued that having money enables people to exert influence over other people. Wealthy businessmen, for example, are often the most highly respected member of society, and business tycoons are often consulted by world leaders, who then make policies that affect the whole population, as a consequence, money an be seen as the single most important factor in daily life.

Secondly, from the point of view of the individual, money is vital for survival. Western society is structured in such a way that, without money, people are deprived of the means to obtain proper nutrition and healthcare. Furthermore, in some cases where state benefits are inadequate ,the inability to pay heating bills and indeed become a matter of life and death. This is clearly illustrated by the fact that, according to Social Services , the majority of death due to hypothermia each winter occurs among low-income groups.

On the hand , many people claim that one of the factors in which is undoubtedly of greater important than money is health. Izaak Walton said , health is “a blessing that money cannot buy”. What is more, money is of little consolation to those who are suffering from health problems. Despite the fact that money can pay for the best medical care available, this is no guarantee of a longer life.

In addition , most people would agree that personal happiness easily outweighs money in importance. Even if an individual is extremely rich , this dose not necessarily lead to happiness . In some cases , the contrary is true , the contrary is true and vast wealth brings with it a range of problems and in securities. Genuine happiness cannot be bought and is usually independent of financial status.
On the whole, although there are those who would rank money the single most important thing in life , the vast majority would disagree. Money , they argue , has an important part to play but perhaps the world would be a more harmonious place to live in if it was kept in proportion and society put more emphasis on moral issues.





THCS XUAN LAM 2012